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Wow, that was really good. Honestly, I didn't get it at the beginning. It took me a while to get into it. I reread the beginning about five times, just ...

Hey there! I noticed you were a new member, so I thought I'd help you out. First of all, this was too short. If you post something that is too ...

Well, it's been forever since I've posted on here, so sorry for the wait. In between long terms of writer's block and being grounded from the internet for weeks on ...

Hello, hello there! I totally agree with what the abover posters said, but I have a few mistakes to point out. War and pulsing, her blood surged in her veins ...

Hello there, I am here to review your story! Here I go: “Jaden , ” a voice called . “Jaden Kaylana, where are you?” I t was a man calling ...

I'm sorry if this is a repeated thread, but if it is, I couldn't find it. I just finished The Sweet Far Thing, so I got inspired to write a ...

Man, this is awesome. You deserve a star! I couldn't find any grammar or spelling errors. I couldn't find anything wrong with it at all. Goodness, I'm sorry that I'm ...

I'll critique first: The first paragraph had the most mistakes. We had been friends for ever, through school, uni, our first job through our 20th job. We have always been ...

I've read all 3. I loved Marked and Betrayed, but Chosen was just terrible. I hated it!! I had 20 pages left and I couldn't even finish it. But all ...

Yeah, what Esme said was totally true. It was really short. But it was good. I only found a few things besides what Esme mentioned. One: The plane touched the ...

Wow! I'm going to give you a star! But anyway... to your review! I struggled to regain composure, and hold in the coming tears. All I needed to do was ...

Everyone covered everything else I thought of before, but I just wanted to commend you again! I actually thought of a scene kind of similar to this, and tried to ...

Awww, this was so sweet. I loved the perspective of a six-year-old, and how she didn't have a care in the world, except to be happy momentarily. But at the ...

Hmm... this was good. And I didn't find any grammatical errors. But this is what I would do to improve it. Let's hope it isn't. Let's hope that instead of ...

I stood outside Adam’s apartment building and waited, my body shivering in the cold. In my hands, I held what I hoped would convince him to let me sleep over: ...